During the homework doing, the phone rang. It was no surprise that it was my mom. She had not phoned me for several days.
Chatting in the phone, they expressed the feeling of missing me and I replied, "I miss you as well." Maybe I would cry if this conversation still went on because I really missed them. Realizing that， I found an excuse, which I was doing my homework, to escape.
From a child aged 7 to now, only 4 years I was alone living in the downtown. Those years I struggled for my education. My mother told me once a time that she felt guilty of my living outside alone. However, I didn't take it seriously. Those experiences made me grow early.
O.K. I consider that I I'd better go home this Thursday and that will surely make my parents happy. Only if they feel happy can I be happy.
| zhaoxi zhangwrote: haha, waston gai de hen hao a~ wo zhi jie jiu kan ni gai de zhe pian le. Lili a Lili, yuan lai zao jiu jiao lili le. xian zai jiao ni hai bu hao yi si cheng ren. "i love you, daddy and mummy"--wo shuo chu le lili ge ge bu hao yi si chu kou de zhen xin hua:) June 11 |
| watson wrote: 平生最恨的事就是写ESSAY没人批。感觉好象是白做功了。 NED啊NED，我帮你改改哦，不要怪我拉，反正已经过期很久，不过有人看到大！ When I was doing the homework, the phone rang. There was no surprise that it was my mom. She had not called me for several days. Chatting on the phone, they expressed the feeling of missing me and I replied, "I miss you too." Maybe I would cry if this conversation still had gone on because I really missed them. Realizing that， I found an excuse that I had to do my homework, to escape. From a child aged 7 to now, only 4 years out of them I was living in the downtown alone. During the years, I struggled for my education career. My mother told me once upon a time that she felt guilty of my living outside alone. However, I didn't take it seriously. Those experiences made me be mature. Okay. I think I'd better go home on this Thursday and that will surely make my parents happy. Only if they feel happy can I be happy 大意没敢多改，嘿嘿~我太无聊了我知道 但是你还是要谢谢我的呀~ Nov. 22 |
| watson wrote: 恩LUTY一定会是个好老师大 哈哈~ 不过能尝试用英文写也是很不错的 该鼓励一下大 Nov. 22 |
| Ned_LiLi wrote: 算了算了，我不计较了 Nov. 14 |
| luty_zhang wrote: 我错了,NED哥哥原谅我吧~~~~ Nov. 12 |
| Ned_LiLi wrote: luty，你挑错么也要线下给我说啊。 Nov. 12 |
| mi粒儿 wrote: 刚考了一下午英文还来让我阅读理解？！郁闷了~~NED记得14号我要把照片给你，帮我带给孩子的~ Nov. 11 |
| luty_zhang wrote: 1.第一句就错了.During the homework being done......不过用了主谓一致,不错. 2.excuse后面应该用that 3.时间状语一般放在最后而不是开头 4.特殊语句用法太多了,以陈述为主,倒装为辅比较好. 完毕 Nov. 11 |
| 茅茅 wrote: NED弟弟是不好意思用中文写自己的感情. Nov. 11 |
| 一子啊 wrote: 小子高级了嘛，拽鸟语 想想我也一个多月没回去了，昨天老妈也打电话过来，唉。。不提了，怪不是滋味的 想想我们其实太过依靠父母了，应该是父母依靠我们的时候了 Nov. 10 |
| 草叶歌吟 wrote: Take more care of our parents when we can! Nov. 7 |
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